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Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do agree or disagree?

#meat #diet
In
the
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recent years,
vegetarian
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 has become a phenomenon among
people
 in the world.
Although
non-meat
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a non-meat
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 diet provides many nutrients for a healthy lifestyle. I believe
not
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 everyone should follow
this
 trend. On the one hand, there are many benefits
of
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 being vegetarian.
Firstly
, there are many nutrients in
vegetables
 to help keep
body
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the body
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 fit. It helps reduce
Cholesterol
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cholesterol
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 in the
body
.
Vegetables
 and fruits contain Fiber, vitamins and low fatty acid.
Thus
, fasting helps
body
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the body
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 to limit the absorption of fat more than eating meat,
For example
,
people
 who
wants
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 to lose weight often choose diets high in green
vegetables
.
Secondly
,
diet
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a diet
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 without meat helps you prevent many diseases
such
 as sick
about
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 the cardiovascular system, cancer or
fattigue
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fatigue
.
For instance
, Oranges contain vitamins C that
are
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 highly beneficial for
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the aging
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aging
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 compartment and the immune system.
On the other hand
, there are many
people
 who need meat with their meals. Actually, if
people
 only eat
vegetables
, children and
elder
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the elder
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 will not
heve
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have
 enough
nutrion
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nutrition
. Because
,
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 there are many nutrients found only in meats
ang
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and
 fishes.
For example
, Carp contains a lot of protein, Iron, Zinc, Vitamins B12,…but not in
vegetables
.
Beside
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 that, not only eating
vegetables
 helps
people
 have
beautiful
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body
. They need to have a reasonable diet combining regular exercise.
For instance
,
people
want
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who want
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 to lose weight can eat chicken breast combined with play sports. To sum up, while I agree that becoming vegetarian can helps
people
 have
the
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 feeling of well-being. But it not good for everyone.
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