Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do agree or disagree?
In
the
recent years, Correct article usage
apply
vegetarian
has become a phenomenon among Add an article
the vegetarian
people
in the world. Use synonyms
Although
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non-meat
diet provides many nutrients for a healthy lifestyle. I believe Add an article
a non-meat
the non-meat
not
everyone should follow Add a pronoun
that not
this
trend.
On the one hand, there are many benefits Linking Words
of
being vegetarian. Verify preposition usage
to
Firstly
, there are many nutrients in Linking Words
vegetables
to help keep Use synonyms
Use synonyms
body
fit. It helps reduce Add an article
the body
Cholesterol
in the Correct your spelling
cholesterol
body
. Use synonyms
Vegetables
and fruits contain Fiber, vitamins and low fatty acid. Use synonyms
Thus
, fasting helps Linking Words
Use synonyms
body
to limit the absorption of fat more than eating meat, Add an article
the body
For example
, Linking Words
people
who Use synonyms
wants
to lose weight often choose diets high in green Change the verb form
want
vegetables
. Use synonyms
Secondly
, Linking Words
diet
without meat helps you prevent many diseases Add an article
a diet
such
as sick Linking Words
about
the cardiovascular system, cancer or Change preposition
from
fattigue
. Correct your spelling
fatigue
For instance
, Oranges contain vitamins C that Linking Words
are
highly beneficial for Change the verb form
is
Add an article
the aging
aging
compartment and the immune system.
Change the spelling
ageing
On the other hand
, there are many Linking Words
people
who need meat with their meals. Actually, if Use synonyms
people
only eat Use synonyms
vegetables
, children and Use synonyms
elder
will not Add an article
the elder
an elder
heve
enough Correct your spelling
have
nutrion
. BecauseCorrect your spelling
nutrition
,
there are many nutrients found only in meats Remove the comma
apply
ang
fishes. Correct your spelling
and
For example
, Carp contains a lot of protein, Iron, Zinc, Vitamins B12,…but not in Linking Words
vegetables
. Use synonyms
Beside
that, not only eating Replace the word
Besides
vegetables
helps Use synonyms
people
have Use synonyms
beautiful
Add an article
a beautiful
body
. They need to have a reasonable diet combining regular exercise. Use synonyms
For instance
, Linking Words
people
Use synonyms
want
to lose weight can eat chicken breast combined with play sports.
To sum up, while I agree that becoming vegetarian can helps Correct pronoun usage
who want
people
have Use synonyms
the
feeling of well-being. But it not good for everyone.Change the article
a
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