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Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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meal preference has changed in
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 21st century as the
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 industry extending its menu list with various kinds of fast cuisine which are easy to prepare as well as getting popularity by replacing our traditional
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 in
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 modern era. I totally concur with
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 notion that processed foodstuff will take place of traditional cuisine due to
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-saving recipes as well as family size. To commence with, the processed meal is preferred as it takes less
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 to prepare.
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,
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such
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 as burger, Maggie, noodles as well as can foodstuff can be made in ten minutes which assist us to save our precious
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 in
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 fast era.
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, world news has estimated that 70% of people are working and do not have enough
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 to make a meal
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 they opt for quick
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 recipes because of the scarcity of
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.
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,
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 kind of unhealthy
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 becomes the cause of multifarious diseases and a rise in death rates.
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, there is another reason that modern cuisine will rise in the coming years because of nuclear families. To explain it, young generation like living alone and spend most of the
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 in fun activities and have a hectic working schedule to get luxury lifestyle
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 they don’t consider to waste their
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 on cooking.
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, in previous years, society used to live in joint families and there were women to prepare
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 and they just took care of the house so they had enough
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 to make a healthy meal and
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 the reason families were healthy during those days to compare today’s generation.
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, a single-parent house will develop fast
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 consumption. To conclude, it is undeniable that a convenience meal will get popularity and developed the
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 industry’s economy as the family structure is changing as well as modern people have
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 shortage in
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 fast-paced world.
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