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You recently attended a conference and you would like to give a presentation about the information you gained by attending the conference. Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter: describe what type of presentation you have in mind what topics it would cover and how long it would take who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted You do NOT need to write any address.

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Dear Mr. Steve, I am writing
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 letter to ask for permission to give a
presentation
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 on the topic of Renewable sources, which I have attended the seminar and researched in detail.
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, I would like you to explain what type of
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 I would like to present for the next conference event. I have deeply studied and gained immersed information about the benefits of renewable sources, which contribute to the world in a major way if
this
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 idea is utilised by all people. For more information, it takes time to explain so I have divided it into five sides to better understand. Well, each topic takes 5 minutes to explain so in which around a half hour
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presentation
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 will be completed. I would like to insist that the members of the team would be 5 and the same conference location would be selected for more convenience to the audience. Hope you would like my
presentation
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 topic and look forward to seeing your response. Yours sincerely, Hardik Mehta
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph presents a clear main idea and that all ideas within the paragraph are cohesively linked to this central theme.
coherence cohesion
Structure the letter with clear paragraphs each dedicated to a separate point: the type of presentation, the topics covered, duration, participants, and location.
task achievement
Expand on each of the letter's required points with relevant details and explanations to show full understanding and achievement of the task.
task achievement
Maintain a polite and professional tone throughout the letter, suitable for a workplace setting.
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