More and more people are using computers and electric devices to access information, therefore there is no need to print books, magazines and newspapers on paper. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays an increasing number of people are concerned about the dimension of the printing business. Whether the instant news from the Internet outweighed the reading of newsletters are caused a hot debate. I agree with the point of view that the version of the
books
might benefit us in several aspects.
firstly
, E-version is easy to carry and purchase. Information comes from a variety of channels including
books
magazines and newsletters. When it comes to select an eBook is easy to access online shopping sites to place an order as well as check the New York Times online. it is
also
convenient that plenty of items or websites are available. And E-versions are normally less expensive than hard copies.
Moreover
, electric devices like Kindle are designed to store up a plethora of
books
that are normally impossible to fit in thousands of
books
in an apartment.
Lastly
, E-
books
are friendly to people suffering from dyslexia as well as vision loss since the content can be read by a screen scanner. so that, people with weak sight can “read “there are
books
anytime they want. of course, they will be out of print
books
which might not available online, still, hard copies are not eco-friendly. most of the hard copy
books
are not manufactured with recycled papers which means trees will need to be chopped off and made the papers.
likewise
, the ink is hazardous for human health and it might be poisoned for the lakes, soil and area around the factory.
besides
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it's extremely painful when it comes to the occasion of moving with boxes of
books
. in some after leveraged pools and cons of eBooks and hard copies, I stand well the point that reach the goal of sustainability and eco-friendly are more important. We should take eBooks as a green consuming lifestyle
that is
worth promoting to everyone .by By doing so we can make sure that we support the balance of the planet step-by-step.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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