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More and more people prefer to read e-books rather than paper books. What are the reasons for this? What problems can this cause for libraries?

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In
this
 modern ,era the reading practice has been entirely changed comparing to the past.It is true that most
people
 prefer to read with their phone or tablets
instead
 of a printed
book
.
This
 essay will discuss the advantages of the e-
book
 reading trend as well as, will find what are the consequences that could happen for
libraries
.
Firstly
,the main reason for the e-
book
 publication reading trend is drastically increasing at present,because of the high convenience,especially easy to access .
Moreover
, electronic
books
 are available offline,it can be used even on flights as well.
In addition
 to that,our youths are very lazy to carry a printed
book
 with them.It may forget somewhere or else the
book
 has to be placed in their luggage t will increase the weight of handbag.These inconveniences can be avoided by the usage of an e-
book
 essay.The main advantage of online
books
 is always available in our electronic gadgets.
Furthermore
,when
people
 read online materials,
people
 are saving the environment.
However
,
although
 there are many advantages that can be seen in online reading,the
libraries
 are going to get affected by fewer
of
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 there is a chance to get close to the
libraries
.Nowadays no one is going to refer the
book
 from the
libraries
,
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because all the information is instantly available in one click.All these shows the traditional way of reading practice may disappear soon. To conclude,
people
 should maintain an equilibrium in terms of reading.Though online
books
 are easy to use it will make some optical health issues.To avoid future eye damage as well as to save our paper-based
books
also
 to show our upcoming generation,
people
 must use the ancestral way of reading.
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