differences between countries become less evident each year. nowadays, all over the world people share same fashion, advertising brand, food habits and tv channels. do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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all around the
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from different cultures tend to follow the same habits and lifestyles and getting closer to each other.
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thousands of years, the whole words go to a standardized and harmonized in different matters. In my opinion,
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, which makes lives easier. The main challenge may
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will face, according to eliminating differences and moving to unity, is to lose of their own cultures, styles, varieties, and even food habits. The proliferation of TV commercials, sponsored by big companies, is encouraging
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to use a certain type of food, clothing, and lifestyle because of their appeal.
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gradual change may eradicate some parts of our culture forever.
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, gradual changes in customs, marketing, trademarks, the pattern of eating, and TV channels are improving towards standardization, which means we are going to an integrated, more harmonized
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in which life much easier. Lifestyle similarity improves
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's mutual understanding, which reduces confrontation between
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, in the case of following the same rules in fashion, speaking, and reactions,
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can understand each other more simple. As can be seen, being unity helps the community to avoid conflict by appreciating each other better than before. The behaviour of
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural homogenization
  • Global market
  • Brand proliferation
  • Cultural diversity
  • Globalization
  • Cultural imperialism
  • Mass media
  • Cultural identity
  • Monoculture
  • Consumerism
  • Multinational corporations
  • Cross-cultural
  • Ethnocentrism
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Local traditions
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