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differences between countries become less evident each year. nowadays, all over the world people share same fashion, advertising brand, food habits and tv channels. do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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Nowadays,
people
 all around the
world
 from different cultures tend to follow the same habits and lifestyles and getting closer to each other.
Although
 it may cause destroy some values, which heritage from our
ancestors
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 thousands of years, the whole words go to a standardized and harmonized in different matters. In my opinion,
this
 movement helps to build an integrated, united
world
, which makes lives easier. The main challenge may
people
 will face, according to eliminating differences and moving to unity, is to lose of their own cultures, styles, varieties, and even food habits. The proliferation of TV commercials, sponsored by big companies, is encouraging
people
 around the
world
 to use a certain type of food, clothing, and lifestyle because of their appeal.
For example
, huge food companies like McDonald, King burger, and KFC encouraging
people
 to have fast foods
instead
 of healthy homemade cocked foods.
Therefore
,
this
 gradual change may eradicate some parts of our culture forever.
On the other hand
, gradual changes in customs, marketing, trademarks, the pattern of eating, and TV channels are improving towards standardization, which means we are going to an integrated, more harmonized
world
 in which life much easier. Lifestyle similarity improves
people
's mutual understanding, which reduces confrontation between
people
.
For instance
, in the case of following the same rules in fashion, speaking, and reactions,
people
 can understand each other more simple. As can be seen, being unity helps the community to avoid conflict by appreciating each other better than before. The behaviour of
people
 around the
world
 is converging towards each other. Despite
this
 may be hard to understand and being adopted by conservatives, it helps make things easier and make the
world
 be a more convenient place. As it was mentioned, the advantage of
this
 trend is much more superior than the disadvantages.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural homogenization
  • Global market
  • Brand proliferation
  • Cultural diversity
  • Globalization
  • Cultural imperialism
  • Mass media
  • Cultural identity
  • Monoculture
  • Consumerism
  • Multinational corporations
  • Cross-cultural
  • Ethnocentrism
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Local traditions
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