Modern lifestyle means that many parents have little time for their children.Manage and run do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past. do you agree or disagree?

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matter whether modern

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bring blessings or curses to human beings. Many people think that they attribute to the fact that

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have to suffer from the lack of their parent's

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. I am personally in favour of

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idea for some reasons stated below.

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of all, it is evident that modern

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do make the

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badly influenced. As

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are too busy earning a living and dealing with other problems of their own, they do not have enough

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to take

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of their

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.

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leads to

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’s being attracted to other interests

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as televisions or the Internet.

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, they can be adversely affected by the violent scenes, the swears or pornographic contents on these things.

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case is much worse when the

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cannot stop immersing themselves more and more in those bad things because their

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still do not have

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to deal with

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problem. Some people may argue that because a couple only have one or two

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, and the standard of living now is far better than it was in the past,

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have much more

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to take

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of their

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, and

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,

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, can receive enough

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and affection.

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, it is not the amount but the kind of

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that counts.

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may

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for their

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but not always on the emotional sides. They, actually, spend most of their

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not caring about their

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’ feelings but worrying about the financial problems, the school fees or the quality of the household appliances.

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, modern

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can

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widen the gap between

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and their offsprings. Mothers and fathers, who do not have

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for their

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or who do

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for their

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but not on the emotional sides, cannot understand their

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’ way of thinking.

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, as the

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grow up, they may want more privacy and

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’ taking

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of them too much may not always make them happy but annoyed

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. It turns out that

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may receive

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’

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, but

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does not help to keep the family close-knit. In conclusion, I believe that it is the modern

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that steal the

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parents

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spend with their

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and

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make the

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suffer from the lack of

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’ love. They keep

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away from their

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and deteriorate their relationship.