In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Today, many countries are facing the same problem. The issue is that the increasing number of

people

that suffer from illnesses caused by the tendency of eating

junk

food

.

Therefore

, the governments consider

to put

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higher

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tax

on

this

sort of

food

. So, in

this

essay, I would like to explain the reasons why I support

this

action as well as provide a plausible conclusion regarding that matter.

To begin

with, as we have known that the

problems

followed by the

tendecy

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tendency

of eating

junk

food

are

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health

problems

,

such

as obesity and diabetes. Those

problems

actually push the government to give a lot of

money

to treat them well.

However

, after decades, the public

money

that uses to treat the patients are getting insufficient.

Thus

, the higher

tax

that the official imposes

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the

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junk

food

restaurants can help

it

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to cure those things.

For instance

, we can take an example

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the

ciggarette

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cigarette

industries in Indonesia. They must pay

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amount of

money

to cover up the costs of health

problems

caused by them.

Hence

, the official can alter

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public

money

to other important matters (e.g education or infrastructure).

Secondly

, another good reason is that when the

tax

is getting higher, the cost of

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junk

food

is

also

getting expensive.

This

occurrence can lower the frequency of

people

eating that kind of

food

.

Nevertheless

,

this

situation might be accompanied by the spreading of healthy restaurants,

for instance

, salad-on-the-go in Indonesia, so that,

people

can alter their eating preference.

As a result

,

this

would reduce the number of obesity cases in a particular country which means that

people

are getting aware of their

food

and

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,

this

method can bring them to live

the

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healthy lifestyle. In a nutshell, imposing

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tax

to

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junk

food

restaurant is a nice solution to encounter the health issues that they caused. That

money

can be used to treat the patients and lowering the frequency to consume it.

Hence

, in the end, I would reiterate my belief that I really agree with that notion.