Some people believe that if a police officer carries guns, it can encourage a higher level of violence. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some are on the view that when a Law enforcement
officer
possess
a firearm on duty, it Change the verb form
possesses
stimulate
Change the verb form
stimulates
Correct article usage
an increase
increase
level of violence. I strongly disagree Replace the word
increased
to
the above rather it Change preposition
with
increase
the chance of Change the verb form
increases
self protection
for the Add a hyphen
self-protection
officer
and the security for
the community.
A Change preposition
of
gun
is issued to a police
officer
as a resemblance of authority and responsibility. To begin
with, any police
officer
will go through extensive training and education before receiving a gun
to active duty. As an example, united
kingdom Correct article usage
the united
police
force requires,an officer
to go through 2 years of post qualification
training on the job with a senior Add a hyphen
post-qualification
officer
to earn a firearm. Moreover
, this
eventually train
the Change the verb form
trains
police
officer
the
importance of using the Change preposition
on the
gun
as and when needed to protect the
society from any threat which can harm the peace of the country.
The current terrorist threats around the globe Correct article usage
apply
needs
extra measurementChange the verb form
need
,
when it comes to domestic security in countries. Remove the comma
apply
Firstly
, any country will use the police
force as the first
point of contact to combat threats which ultimately requires the police
officer
to be equipped to handle any situation. In addition
to this
, the increase
of domestic theft and burglary levels means that police
officer
needs
act fast and needs to make sure that their life's Add the particle
toneeds
also
is safe, and for this
reason
it will help to Add a comma
,reason
increase
the self protection
of the Add a hyphen
self-protection
officer
it self
.
In conclusion, Correct your spelling
itself
eventhough
some people Correct your spelling
even though
feels
that carrying a Change the verb form
feel
gun
by a police
officer
increase
the chance of having violence, it is quite evident that having a firearm by a trained and a
responsible Correct article usage
apply
officer
will only increase
the chance to mitigate such
unfortunate events in the
society.Correct article usage
apply
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