Some people believe that if a police officer carries guns, it can encourage a higher level of violence. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some are on the view that when a Law enforcement
officer
possess
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a firearm on duty, it
stimulate
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an increase
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increase
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level of violence. I strongly disagree
to
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the above rather it
increase
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the chance of
self protection
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for the
officer
and the security
for
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the community. A
gun
is issued to a
police
officer
as a resemblance of authority and responsibility.
To begin
with, any
police
officer
will go through extensive training and education before receiving a
gun
to active duty. As an example,
united
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kingdom
police
force requires,an
officer
to go through 2 years of
post qualification
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training on the job with a senior
officer
to earn a firearm.
Moreover
,
this
eventually
train
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the
police
officer
the
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importance of using the
gun
as and when needed to protect
the
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society from any threat which can harm the peace of the country. The current terrorist threats around the globe
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extra measurement
,
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when it comes to domestic security in countries.
Firstly
, any country will use the
police
force as the
first
point of contact to combat threats which ultimately requires the
police
officer
to be equipped to handle any situation.
In addition
to
this
, the
increase
of domestic theft and burglary levels means that
police
officer
needs
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act fast and needs to make sure that their life's
also
is safe, and for
this
reason
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it will help to
increase
the
self protection
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of the
officer
it self
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. In conclusion,
eventhough
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even though
some people
feels
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that carrying a
gun
by a
police
officer
increase
the chance of having violence, it is quite evident that having a firearm by a trained and
a
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responsible
officer
will only
increase
the chance to mitigate
such
unfortunate events in
the
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society.
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