Many governments spent a lot of money on art. Some people think that this investment in art is necessary, but others say the money is better spent on improving health and education. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Generally, an abundance of expenditure is done on art. While it is believed that
this
spending is fruitful, some argue that it is prudent to invest it in education as well as the health sector. Linking Words
However
, I believe that it is wise to spend money on the development of the former and the latter, for it will ensure the longevity of the people and will be responsible for the increase in the employment rate.
There are a few good reasons to encourage the government to expend revenue on important areas, Linking Words
such
as health and education. One of them is that it will improve the well-being of the citizens. Linking Words
In other words
, they should spend on building hospitals and clinics where an individual can get treated either free of cost or at an economical price. Linking Words
For instance
, the occurrence of a disaster Linking Words
such
as a tsunami or floods gives rise to water-borne diseases amongst people, if health centres are pervasive in an area, Linking Words
then
the disaster victims can easily get themselves treated there. The other reason is, schools and colleges majorly focus on exam-driven curriculum, even though the number of graduates is increasing significantly, the unemployment rate is rising. Linking Words
Therefore
, if the legislature expends on improving the quality of education Linking Words
this
situation can be averted.
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Although
it is not so important, some think it is vital to invest in art as it depicts the cultural heritage and creativity level of a country. Linking Words
Moreover
, it is believed that it is the best way to flaunt the talent of a nation. Linking Words
For example
, the more advance the art field in a region, the more one can compete with the other nations. Linking Words
In addition
, if more money is spent on establishing painting and dance institutes, Linking Words
then
more prospects would participate in it. Linking Words
Consequently
, talent will increase.
In conclusion, though the government can motivate citizens to hone their creative skills and represent a country's culture by involving them in arts and crafts, Linking Words
nevertheless
I reckon it is wiser to focus on building medical facilities and educational institutions to protect and educate humans.Linking Words
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