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More and more people want to buy clothes, cars and other items with famous brands. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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Majority
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The majority
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 of the
people
 today intend to purchase their personal items like garments and vehicle from well-known branded companies.
Infact
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In fact
,
quality
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the quality
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 of the products and matter of social status
are
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is
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 the main reason behind
this
 trend.I think buying branded accessories is a positive development in
present
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the present
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 world ,which will be discussed in
this
 essay.
Firstly
,
quality
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the quality
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 of the product is the key factor that every customer will look forward
while
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to while
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 purchasing an item.Indeed, it is a common belief in our
socity
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society
 that branded companies can ensure the quality of
its
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their
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 product
therefore
 more and more
people
 are gravitated to purchase
such
 companies' products.
For instance
, compare to any other mobile phones in
market
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the market
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 ,most
of
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apply
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the
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apply
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people
 always buy Apple i-phones because of the trust they have
on
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in
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 that company.
Secondly
, having an international product is considered to be
status
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a status
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 symbol in
majority
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the majority
a majority
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 of the communities.To be
exampliied
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exemplified
,
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a
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Range rover in a car porch and a Louis Phillipe or John Players shirt
are
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is
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 believed to be
great
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a great
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 asset in
life
.
However
, in the past
people
 led amicable
life
 and they thought
of
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apply
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having an elephant was a greater achievement in their
life
, but
situation
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the situation
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 has been changed a lot nowadays.
Therefore
 ,
people
 are ready to run behind brands in order to show off
infront
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in front
 of their friends and family. In conclusion ,
life style
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lifestyle
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 of
people
 has been changed
since
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for
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long
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a long
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 time. Today most of the
people
 have enough money and they all are well settled.
Hence
, it is the necessity of the
people
 to go after new trends in society.
As a result
, in my
opinion
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,opinion
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 buying famous brands items is a positive development.
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