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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems . To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

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Speaking the native
language
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 of the country where you live is crucial in
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 to avoid social and every day problems.
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 essay completely agrees with that statement, mainly due to the difficulties of making new friends and using the local
transportation
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 system.
Firstly
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, It is often a hard task to create new friendships when you speak a foreign
language
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.
This
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 is simply because when you do not speak the local
language
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 it is more difficult to talk fluently and understand slang phrases, which are vital requirements in
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communicating
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 with others.
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, it can be
challanging
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challenging
 for a student that decides to study in a foreign country to find friends without speaking the native
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in
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 a high level.
Secondly
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, in
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 to navigate
comfortabley
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comfortably
 in a large
city
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 you usually need to have
a
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firm control of the local spoken
language
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. Nowadays, the vast majority of the information regarding the
transportation
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 system of a
metropolin
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metropolis
metropolitan
 could only be found on the internet, and it is often displayed only in the local
language
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.
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, one of the most popular ways of
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 in
europe
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are
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 trains. For an individual who does not speak the local
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language
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 it can be fairly complicated to find the right train in
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 to reach his desired destination. In conclusion, I strongly believe that there are some significant drawbacks
in
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 living in a country where you cannot speak your mother
tounge
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tongue
language
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. These obstacles may be the difficulty of making new friends and using the local
transportation
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 system.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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