So,Almost everybody nowadays is found using personal vehicle for travelling purpose. What are the reasons of this increasing trend? Explain what negative outcomes may be faced in the society due to this.

#everybody #vehicle #purpose #trend #outcomes #society

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

Most

Change preposition

apply

show examples

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

people prefer to travel in private vehicles these days.

This

is because everyone is in hurry and want to reach their destination in

short

Add an article

a short

show examples

time.

This

has severe

repurcusions

Correct your spelling

repercussions

on the environment. The major reason behind

this

is everyone

prefer

Change the verb form

prefers

show examples

to travel in the least time. People are in rush. They want to reach their destination as soon as possible. They do not like to wait;

however

, while travelling in private vehicles they do not need to wait. While travelling by public transport, people have to stand in

queue

Add an article

a queue

the queue

show examples

to buy tickets.

Further

, public vehicles stop for some time at every station which

cause

Change the verb form

causes

show examples

delay.

Submitted by Priya on Fri Apr 02 2021

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

108 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

8
band
The road near your house is completely unsuitable for traffic. Write a letter to your local council. In your letter: • Introduce yourself; • Explain what the problem is; • Tell what would you like to be done. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ....,
I am John Scot and I am currently living in "Locky Hill" next to the "Barlie Road". I am writing to request your urgent action for congested traffic due to this road's improper construction.
7.5
band
Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?
In contemporary times, many companies compete with each other by broadcasting numerous advertisements, leading some people to believe that consumers are significantly influenced by these adverts. From my point of view, I disagree with this notion. My supporting reasons, as well as ways to protect citizens from advertisements, will be outlined in the following paragraphs before reaching a conclusion.
5
band
Some people feel that entertainment (eg film stars, pop musicians and story stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of Jobs should be highly paid.
In this Contomporary era, the entertainment sector play a crucial role in people's loves. A certain number of people are considered that entertainers such as actors, pop musicians, and story starts are paid more money. I strongly disagree with this statement because professionals like teachers, and doctors should be highly paid. This essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
<4
band
Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problem are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or an negative development
Recently, medical treatments preference has been altered within the society. This issue drives two deterrent effects simultaneously, which subjected to the earlier mentioned is notified to be affordable, while less acknowledged status is experienced as the detrimental impact. Eventually, to my knowledge this concern would only pertaining to inevitable trustworthy application in regards to the reference drugs.
7.5
band
Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People tend to spend time together, work together, and eventually live together, which seems to be the nature of human beings.However, an intimate relationship can also lead to endless arguments and fights. That's why it's crucial for us to seek a way to maintain a proper balance between any kind of relationship in life.

So,Almost everybody nowadays is found using personal vehicle for travelling purpose. What are the reasons of this increasing trend? Explain what negative outcomes may be faced in the society due to this.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?

Some people feel that entertainment (eg film stars, pop musicians and story stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of Jobs should be highly paid.

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problem are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or an negative development

Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.