Present a written argument or case to an educated non-specialist audience on the following topic. Globalization has led to the introduction of many new international products into local shops and markets. What do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of this example of globalization?

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Liberalization of trade has lead to an influx of global

products

in the domestic markets. The good thing about

this

is that people get

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exposure to the

world

market and can use

products

that are not available domestically.

However

, the negative impact is that we stop using local

products

and get completely dependant on imported

products

. In my opinion, globalization has been disadvantageous to

the

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domestic manufacturers. Opening the doors of local markets to the

world

allows us to experience the different

products

manufactured globally. Some of these could be technologically advanced or scientifically superior and others made naturally.

Such

products

might not be available in our country as maybe we do not have the requisite technology, resources or knowledge even.

For instance

, France is considered the epitome of fashion and the birthplace of many famous couture design houses. We will never be able to experience and wear their fashion unless we open our gates to French

products

. Globalization helps to experience global

products

first

hand.

World

trade has had a negative impact on

the

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entrepreneurs in our own country. They are unable to sell their

products

because we have increased our dependency on international items and have changed our liking to suit imported

brands

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we hardly have any Indian car or mobile phone manufacturers. The market is flooded with either Chinese or Japanese

brands

although

our Indian counterparts are bad at all.

This

has caused international car and mobile phone manufacturers to be at top of the table while the Indian companies come after that. Resorting to global trade has lead to many international

products

being brought in to domestic markets.

This

has had a bad influence on our people and resident

brands

although

it has helped us open our eyes to the

world

. In my opinion,

although

globalization is important, we must strongly promote and purchase local

brands

more than international

products

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Present a written argument or case to an educated non-specialist audience on the following topic. Globalization has led to the introduction of many new international products into local shops and markets. What do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of this example of globalization?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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