Present a written argument or case to an educated non-specialist audience on the following topic. Globalization has led to the introduction of many new international products into local shops and markets. What do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of this example of globalization?

Liberalization of trade has lead to an influx of global
products
in the domestic markets. The good thing about
this
is that people get
an
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exposure to the
world
market and can use
products
that are not available domestically.
However
, the negative impact is that we stop using local
products
and get completely dependant on imported
products
. In my opinion, globalization has been disadvantageous to
the
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domestic manufacturers. Opening the doors of local markets to the
world
allows us to experience the different
products
manufactured globally. Some of these could be technologically advanced or scientifically superior and others made naturally.
Such
products
might not be available in our country as maybe we do not have the requisite technology, resources or knowledge even.
For instance
, France is considered the epitome of fashion and the birthplace of many famous couture design houses. We will never be able to experience and wear their fashion unless we open our gates to French
products
. Globalization helps to experience global
products
first
hand.
World
trade has had a negative impact on
the
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entrepreneurs in our own country. They are unable to sell their
products
because we have increased our dependency on international items and have changed our liking to suit imported
brands
.
For example
,
currently
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we hardly have any Indian car or mobile phone manufacturers. The market is flooded with either Chinese or Japanese
brands
although
our Indian counterparts are bad at all.
This
has caused international car and mobile phone manufacturers to be at top of the table while the Indian companies come after that. Resorting to global trade has lead to many international
products
being brought in to domestic markets.
This
has had a bad influence on our people and resident
brands
although
it has helped us open our eyes to the
world
. In my opinion,
although
globalization is important, we must strongly promote and purchase local
brands
more than international
products
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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