People across the world are more similar than they are different. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In all

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across the world,

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have more

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in all more than differences. I am largely in agreement with

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phenomenon.

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, human psychology and mindset are equal in all

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. In simple terms, the thinking process related to the subjects is eye to eye. No matter which

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people

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live in; the necessities and lifestyle are equal,

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as food, clothes, etc.

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, In every country like India and the USA; day and night have some difference with time but

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go to work and rest time they spend with families that are quite similar in all territories.

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, employment is

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equal

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as agriculture, finance, teaching, and business sectors and markets.

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have equality in many terms of human life.

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and all over the globe are different but have

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at one point.

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slang and words change according to the distance of lands but there are a lot more

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in a few scripts.

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, many dialects are driven from one core

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, the difference is that

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is the way of writing and speaking. To cite an example, a country like India has more than twenty-five

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as Punjabi, Hindi, Telugu, Bengali, and so on.

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, all

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are drive from a single

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i.e. Sanskrit. Punjabi and Hindi are driven from the Sanskrit

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and both are well-matched with each other. Research has shown that all mother tongues in India have some

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with other

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follow the same traditions in many

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, like Christmas. To conclude,

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all over the world have some dissimilarity but at some point, they all are connected with one root; at some point, speeches, traditions, and human

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are chiefly the same in all

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globalization
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Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any other experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?

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