You are looking for a full-time job, and recently you saw a job opening in am advertisement Write a letter to the company. In your letter: • introduce yourself • explain what sort of job you would like to do • and say what experience and skills you have You should write at least 150 words

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply for the programmer in your company called "Microsoft". My full name is Eshmamatova Lola Bekzodovna and I was born on 11th June 2000th year. The Microsoft company, that you have advertised in a local newspaper recently. I would like to work as a programmer. I will take
initiative
Correct article usage
the initiative
show examples
to create new, useful and handy programs. I have a huge interest in IT. I have big aims, one of them, I create some kind of program that all students who learn foreign languages use
this
program. I hope students will find my program useful. I have completed my graduation from Tashkent Perfect University in 2023. I have worked for a year at
company
Add an article
a company
show examples
called "Apple" as a programmer. I do not see enough career growth experience with
employer
Correct pronoun usage
my employer
show examples
and that's why I want to switch my job. I would appreciate it if you would hire me. If you need any post details and information, please do not hesitate to call me. Yours sincerely, Eshmamatova Lola
Submitted by omondavlat91 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

coherence
Try to make sentences flow better by using linking words and phrases to connect your ideas more coherently.
task response
Provide information relevant to the job, like specific skills that match the job description and achievements in your previous role.
task response
The letter addresses all the main points asked for in the task: introduction, desired job, experience, and skills.
coherence
Clear and polite closing and greeting, adding to a professional tone.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: