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As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign language is a waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is true that computers are translated our speech in a fraction of a
second
 with full of accuracy.
However
, there is an ongoing debate on the learning a foreign
language
 is worth it or just a waste of time. Well, I firmly disagree with the view which says that it is not worth it. In
this
 essay, I will represent the reasons to support my view.
To begin
 with, learning a new
language
 has numerous benefits. A
person
 who knows more than one
language
 has a greater chance to get a job in a well-known company easily compare to those who can only speak or write his or her mother tongue.
For instance
, In Canada, if anybody has the knowledge of Spanish as well as the English
language
then
 they hired quickly and
also
 get the desired salary.
Furthermore
, a Bi-lingual
person
 easily visits other countries without feeling any hesitation.
Hence
, they easily establish their business in a suitable company as
they
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also
 aware of the culture of that nation. To give an example, A
person
 who lives in India and wants to do business in Canada which is an English-speaking country
then
 he/she might do business in Canada if he or she aware of the English
language
.
Moreover
, having a multilinguistic skill create an incredible image in society.
This
person
 easily commutes and communicate with anybody which makes them an expert in building a strong relationship with their teammates or loved ones or relatives. In a nutshell,
Although
 computers are a faster way to translate your mother-tongue in other linguistic, I would say being multilinguistic in
this
 world is essential as
this
 world become a global village.
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