Some people think success in life comes from hard work and determination. Others think money and appearance are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion

it is widely believed that being hard-working and strenuous will bring a successful
life
for humanity.While many people suppose that
money
and
appearance
are two more significant factors, I believe that the
determination
of each individual is the key to any rewards. On the one hand. There are a variety of reasons why
money
and
appearance
contribute to
success
in
life
.
Firstly
, in terms of
money
,
this
factor plays
such
an integral part in human
life
. With a huge amount of
money
, people could meet their basic needs
such
as being able to afford the latest version of a car, a desirable house or even going on a luxurious holiday.
Secondly
, with a good-looking
appearance
, individuals would become more outstanding and attractive that enable them to be paid lots of attention and affection from society.
Therefore
, they would gain more confidence for some special occasions
such
as the day dating with whom they love. Both these elements so would help communication to have a good sense of
life
satisfaction or happiness.
This
can be defined as
success
that everyone is pursuing in
life
.
On the other hand
, I believe that with
determination
and enthusiasm, people could overcome
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hard situation in order to gain any rewarding achievements in
life
.
For instance
, the legendary footballer, Cristiano Ronaldo, by his considerable effort regardless of all poor conditions, now is one of the best football stars around the world that brings him to countless achievements and the
success
and reputation of an incredible
life
.
Moreover
, even haven't reached any rewards, individuals with their respectful
determination
will never have a feeling of regretting what they have tried so hard to achieve.
This
is an essential lesson and a valuable motivation to encourage society to work hard again until they gain a truly successful
life
. in conclusion both
money
,
appearance
and
determination
are indispensable elements for
success
but I believe that the shortest way leading to
success
is the effort and
determination
of individuals

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