Some people think success in life comes from hard work and determination. Others think money and appearance are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion

it is widely believed that being hard-working and strenuous will bring a successful

life

for humanity.While many people suppose that

money

and

appearance

are two more significant factors, I believe that the

determination

of each individual is the key to any rewards. On the one hand. There are a variety of reasons why

money

and

appearance

contribute to

success

in

life

.

Firstly

, in terms of

money

,

this

factor plays

such

an integral part in human

life

. With a huge amount of

money

, people could meet their basic needs

such

as being able to afford the latest version of a car, a desirable house or even going on a luxurious holiday.

Secondly

, with a good-looking

appearance

, individuals would become more outstanding and attractive that enable them to be paid lots of attention and affection from society.

Therefore

, they would gain more confidence for some special occasions

such

as the day dating with whom they love. Both these elements so would help communication to have a good sense of

life

satisfaction or happiness.

This

can be defined as

success

that everyone is pursuing in

life

.

On the other hand

, I believe that with

determination

and enthusiasm, people could overcome

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difficult challenge and

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hard situation in order to gain any rewarding achievements in

life

.

For instance

, the legendary footballer, Cristiano Ronaldo, by his considerable effort regardless of all poor conditions, now is one of the best football stars around the world that brings him to countless achievements and the

success

and reputation of an incredible

life

.

Moreover

, even haven't reached any rewards, individuals with their respectful

determination

will never have a feeling of regretting what they have tried so hard to achieve.

This

is an essential lesson and a valuable motivation to encourage society to work hard again until they gain a truly successful

life

. in conclusion both

money

,

appearance

and

determination

are indispensable elements for

success

but I believe that the shortest way leading to

success

is the effort and

determination

of individuals