Nowadays, people prefer to live and work anywhere they want because of the improvement in transportation and technology. Discuss the benefits and drawbacks of this.

In recent times, life
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been a lot easier owing to the advancement in science and technology. Individuals can now choose to reside and
work
from any destination.
This
essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of
this
development. One positive effect of deciding to live and
work
from
any where
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in the world is the meaningful experience acquired through it. Those living outside their hometown, have the opportunity to learn about other peoples culture,
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language and beliefs.
For instance
, Nigerians residing in the United Kingdom have been able to see and enjoy the other side of life,
such
the
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snow and various delicacies available over there,
thus
, expanding their horizons.
This
wouldn't have been possible if there were no aeroplanes to transport people to the Country.
Also
, with the advent of smartphones and computers, it is now possible to
work
from the comfort of our homes and get paid.
For example
,
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evidence suggests that 60% of the world's working population were able to maintain their jobs during the peak of the
corona virus
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pandemic because they were able to
work
from homes using their systems.
However
, there are
also
negative consequences accompanying
such
development.
Firstly
, one may face
descrimination
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in a strange land . A lot of persons working outside their communities encounter
such
situations and are being treated unfairly because they don't understand the language of the people and due to their skin colour.
As a result
, may find it difficult
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a
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better
work
over there.
In addition
, they may find it difficult to adapt to their new environment and
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weather conditions of the new location. In conclusion,
although
it is now possible to migrate
to
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anywhere in the world due to technologies, there are
also
problems encountered in a strange land.

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Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

Linking words for giving examples:

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  • for instance
  • to illustrate this
  • to give a clear example
  • such as
  • namely
  • to illustrate
  • take, for example

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