University should accept equal number of male and female in very subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree

The issues of whether the
number
of male and female in University should be balanced has a lot of debates. Some might say that it is impossible to be received equality in the
number
of boys and girls applications because of differences in hobbies and physical functions.
On the contrary
, others insist on the opinion that both men and
women
should be balanced in everything. Viewing from a general perspectively, I personally agree with the former opinion
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the following reason.
To begin
with, in University, waiting for the equal
number
of male and female for opening class lead to a lot of problems and influence teaching activities.
Firstly
, boys and girls have different preferences.
For example
, most girls often like professions related to beauty while the boy has very few people. So that it will unfair to force male students to study.
Secondly
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physical functions determine the choice of
subject
, for the exposed with strict physical criteria, most
women
are not able to fit in so the university can not lower their standard for recruiting
women
.
Finally
, if educational institution waits for a
number
of men and
women
equally on every
subject
, they have to pay a lot of expenses
such
as fee for lecture, copyrights of syllabus...
On the other hand
, balancing the
number
of both male and female in all
subject
is necessary for gender equality in society.
However
,
reality
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this
is difficult to do and
this
is wasting time and money for something that will never happen. In conclusion, it is impossible to equal the
number
of male and female in every
subject
.
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