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Tobacco is a kind of drug. People have been free to use it. Some people think that it should be illegal to use it compared with other drugs. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What is your opinion?

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Tobacco
 is definitely a
drug
 unfortunately many
people
 are free to
use
 it
however
 some
people
 think it should be illegal. I believe that consumption of
tobacco
 In any form should be prohibited. To support my opinion, I shall put some arguments below.
To begin
 with, the number of
people
 who are addicted to smoking is gradually increasing with the passage of time.
This
 may be due to
easy
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 availability of
this
 cancer everywhere. Especially, teenager smokers tend to higher than ever before.
For example
, in a recent survey in the
USA
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 about 60% school going kids have confirmed addiction. I personally think
any thing
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anything
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 that can harm your body is
drug
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a drug
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 and
tobacco
 is
in
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one of them.
Tobacco
 not only
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affects
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effects
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affects
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 the person who is smoking(active smoker) but
also
to
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the person (passive smoker)who is sitting
next
 to him.
Tobacco
 cigarettes can cause COPD, lung carcinoma and oral cancer.
People
 and free to
use
tobacco
 because of
lack
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the lack
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 of rules and regulation. Government must prohibit the
use
 or even growth of
tobacco
. Rulers must have
strict
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a strict
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 policy regarding
to
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it. The
use
 of
tobacco
 smoking
at
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in
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public
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a public
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 place should be illegal. Any
drug
 abuse can not be defended because
drug
 abuser impacts
on
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society.
For example
, many
drug
 user may turn to crime to meet the increasing expense of their habit. There should be school base
tobacco
 and smoking cessation programmers which help us to keep our youth away from
this
 cancer.
Similarly
, there should be restrictions on
sale
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the sale
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 of
tobacco
 at local shops. To sum up, due to
adverse
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the adverse
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 effect of smoking on
human
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the human
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 body,
government
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the government
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 must interfere and prohibit the growth and sale of
this
 abusive
drug
.
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