Write a letter to the police sub inspector complaining about the lack of discipline in your locality with respect to the behavior of certain youth mishaps. 1. Discuss the complaint in detail clarifying the erroneous troublemaking behavior of the young people in your locale. 2. Suggest what could be done to find appropriate solution. 3. Suggest what you expect from the police.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to bring your attention to the mischievous behaviour of some youngsters in my surroundings.
Furthermore
, recently some teenagers have moved into our society. As they are very young and live independently, it seems they do not care about others. Additionally
, at night, when it is time to sleep, they start loud music. This
is really causing trouble especially, to elders.
When some of us ask them to stop their activities, they do not take it seriously. We have also
informed the landlord about it. We seek your help in this
matter. It will be better if they leave form here or else stop their action.
I request you to send any of your team here and make them understand the genuine problem. In the worst case, what legal action can be taken against them also
needs to be explained.
Looking for your quick and positive action on the issue.
Yours faithfully,
Jaimini PatelSubmitted by jaimini2000 on
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coherence cohesion
Your introduction and closing are satisfactory, but the body of the letter can benefit from clearer organization and ensuring a new paragraph for each distinct point.
task achievement
The content of your complaint needs to be more specific. Name particular incidents, dates, and describe how exactly the behaviour of the youth has affected the community to clearly state the problem.
task achievement
Your letter should also have included suggested solutions and what specific actions you expect from the police, not just a request for intervention, as the task specified.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite