Some people believe that cooking at home is a waste of time. They feel it is better to buy fast food which is more convenient and less stressful in modern life. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience.

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considered as wasting of our precious time according to some,

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instead

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ordering from a

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outlets would be much easier. In my view, I strongly disagree

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viewpoint because of health and financial aspects.

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, the hygiene practice of the hotels and

fast

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food

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chains is highly questionable.

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, it is often noted that the basic standard of cleanliness may not be maintained by the majority of the centres. Due to

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after

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consuming these kinds of edible

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can cause serious health issues

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for instance

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, vomiting and infections. When cooking dishes at home can be time consuming and boring,

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, the quality always

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maintained

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, online

food

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stores and shops make us

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feel that it is much faster and readily available than the one we cook at home.

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, in reality, the customers

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their

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a large amount of

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if they

are hugely depend

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on fast foods. In order to taste better, the makers add

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, artificial colours,

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, and fat and so on. Most of these

incredients

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ingredients

are not healthy, but it makes the

food

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item is even more expensive. In conclusion, even though many people

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that buying

food

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from fast

food

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centers

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is less hectic and easy to access

them

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can lead

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health issues and damage to the financial status of the person who depends on

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in an uncontrolled manner.It is predicted that there may be more healthy options will be available for the public through the fast-

food

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stores.

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