You are currently taking a course at a university but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the university of Dean. In the letter: •Give details of your course •Explain why you need a week off •Say what you want the Dean to do.

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Dear Sir/Mam, I hope

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letter finds you well. My name is Harjeet and I am taking an International Business Management course at your university. I am writing

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letter for a week off by it. To explain it, I want to start my course

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week but for some reason, I have to start late. The reason is that my grandmother is not well, she has been admitted to the hospital and doctors are talking, she is critical so why I want to spend time with her because she does not have enough time to live.

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, I am not well and I cannot concentrate on my studies at

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time.

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, I want to request you that, please provide me with full details of assignments and work that completed in a class because I want to get a better score

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year since my grandmother wants to me get high scores for my Master's degree.

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is my grandmother's dream and I will complete it. I hope you will understand my situation and I will be waiting for a good response from you. Thank you, Yours faithfully, Harjeet.

harmanpreetkang20Wed May 08 2024

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Grammar and Accuracy

Make sure to proofread your letter for small typos or grammatical inaccuracies, although your message is very clear.

Task Response

For a higher score, consider providing a specific plan or asking for specific accommodations during your week off.

Coherence and Cohesion

Your letter is well-organized, but using transitions between paragraphs can enhance the flow even more.

Task Achievement

You clearly explained the reason for your week off and connected it personally, making your request compelling.

Tone

Your opening and closing are appropriately formal, establishing a respectful tone with the Dean.

Coherence and Cohesion

Your paragraphs focus on distinct points, making your letter easy to follow.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

191 words

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