many people believe that bicycle is a healthy and environmentally friendly mode of transport. However,it is no longer the main form of transport. What are the reasons?What could be done to encourage the use of bicycles among the wider population?

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One possible reason is the relatively low speed under the advent of new transport with high speed .A large amount of time would be spent
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by riding a bike even though the cyclist is incredibly adept with cycling and riding very fast. After all,the speed of bicycles can not be compared with automobiles,underground railways and even electronic bicycles.
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, it would take me approximately more than 2 hours during a 20
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contrasted with only 1 hour by subway or driving.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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