Some people believe that it is wrong for professional athletes to compete in the Olympics because their strong financial backing and training give them an unfair advantage over the other athletes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people that professional athletes have advantages due to their training so they should not compete in Olympics. I

also

agree with

this

because

profeesional

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professional

professionals

have been through better training and

aware

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of the practices to win the

game

.

Firstly

,

professionals

are trained and received proper guidance from the trainers. To be perfect at something it is mandatory to get training which these

professionals

are already taken. Competition should be between those who are equally trained but these

professionals

are

are

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over qualified

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than others.

This

will be

an

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unfair

practise

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practice

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if these

professionals

compete with beginners.

For instance

, a professional athlete

go

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under

training

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of

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several years which other participants do not get.

Hence

, they are not as guided as

professionals

.

Secondly

, these

professionals

are completely

know

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to

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the techniques to win the

game

. These are

professionals

and known to the tacts.

In

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game

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the game

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, there are

loop holes

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which

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can be used for victory. Because these are playing

from

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a number of years, they can easily use these techniques and beat the other candidates.

For instance

, they know where to speed up and where to slow down. These things help them to win easily from the non-

professionals

.

Therefore

, it is better if they do not take part in these. In conclusion,

professionals

are in advantage as they are guided and been through the required

trainings

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. They are aware of all the techniques which

helps

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them to win the

game

. I

also

believe

,

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they have

benefits

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than

other candidate

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so they should not take part in Olympics.