Some say that the most important thing about being rich is that one has the opportunity to help other. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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it is true that wealthy

people

indeed have chances to help

others

in society nowadays, while I believe that

people

who have a warm heart without wealth can give some consolation to the person needed help. On the one

hand

money

is a crucial belonging for everyone to embrace, without

money

, some poor families could not live ahead.

Furthermore

, there are various types of contributions of wealthy

people

in society to give a

hand

to fulfil the demand needed.

For example

, a lot of donations of materials, food, drink, clothing, and

others

for the disastrous tsunami in Japan several years ago. Most donations which come from strong capability person due to huge funding are invested in.

As a result

, the necessities of life are able done by the powerful premium class.

However

, in the supplies aspect are easier to get, in

others

side, lack of volunteers getting help on-site, without donate

money

instead

of giving our both

hand

to reduce their fear on their physio after a severe disaster. We have often looked at many

people

who were willing to assist the government to tackle the serious issue after faced the catastrophe at the news reported on the TV program, and we knew that emergency workers

such

as firemen and medical personnel were always inadequate when vast of

people

needed help. it'd showed pleasure aura when they worked together.

Besides

, most of them have a kind personality, they would give a

hand

when

others

on difficulties.

In other words

, middle-class

people

can involve in society without any

money

. In conclusion, it is important for

money

being are bring a lot of benefits in the world, and I feel that not so rich

also

can bring some advantages when

others

needed.

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