Too much emphasis is put on going to university for academic studies. We should encourage people to have vocational education since there are not enough qualified businessmen, electricians, and plumbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Undoubtedly, with the rapid development of environmental issues, the recycling system has become increasingly significant.

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responsibilities, others refer to it as

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duties. From my perspective, I am in

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of the latter, and the reasons will be elaborated on as follows.

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with, it is noticeable that the

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and large businesses have made very limited changes

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rapidly expanding

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, even though some industrial

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impacts our environment, the waste from our daily lives by

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is a major issue.

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, in terms of

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and large companies, the finances they use potentially come from each citizen, which influences everybody.

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, people commonly use plastic bags and containers in daily life. There are tons of rubbish from many countries.

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, we should not ignore how much waste people make.

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take some steps to address

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need to assist through daily routines.

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, residents can reduce the emissions of carbon dioxide by taking public transportation

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of driving their own cars.

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, citizens can bring their own reusable containers to limit the use of plastic boxes.

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a study conducted by National Taiwan University from 2020 to 2024, over 40% of plastic bags have been reduced

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the ‘bring your own bags’ policy.

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showed clear evidence that

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can efficiently assist in solving

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issues. In conclusion, based on the aforementioned reasons, I strongly agree that the problem of

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