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in the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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In the ultramodern epoch, it is a point of debate that now we are living in the 21st century and the world is growing rapidly in technology. So in the
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future everyone will read the news on the
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 notion remains successful in keeping the majority in its favour. The upcoming paragraph would cast light on my argument related to the very conception. I wholeheartedly concur with the statement that in the modern era some industries developing rapidly and they are used a lot of natural sources. Most of the company used wood for produced paper.
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 paper is very costly. So when making the paper launch in the market it will be so expensive. Many families would not like to buy so expensive books. In simple word, paper-based book, magazine and newspaper are very costly for reading. To add a few more reasons, how can one forgets about the
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 is growing very fast in every area and everyone can get knowledge from the
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 source is very affordable for the individual. To some extent, it is very useful for the folk who have not timed to buy newspaper and magazine.
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 but not least, numerous human travelling in public transport like bus and train. In some country, public transport does not provide the magazine and newspaper than what will society do for getting news and some.
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google. On the final note, I am of the opinion that the community will definitely like the
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 because it is easy for the source to getting information.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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