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Many people believe that social networking sites (e.g. Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and sociaty.

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Social media as Facebook is considered to have a vulnerable impact as a human and society. Personally, I cannot absolutely agree with
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networks
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possitive
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positive
functuons
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functions
function
 for us,
such
 as sharing information. Indeed there is a negative effect because of using the
networks
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For example
, today a lot of people have
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 social media, they can spend a significant part of their time on Instagram and other sites. According to the statistics of the magazine Time, people waste approximately 4 hours per day on
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surviving
serving
surfing
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 the internet
although
 they may do something a more useful.
Thus
, social
networks
 could be harmful for a population.
However
, we should not
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forget about
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 beneficial influences of the sites. To give a clear example, due to using
a popular
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networks
 we can
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easily
 get information, for
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example
 people have quickly known about the
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earthquake
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the
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. The
second
 benefit which social sites give us is
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available and a
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comfortable communication around the world.
For instance
, for humans chat via the media is cheaper and easier
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that
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 other ways.
In addition
, we can notice the growth of international communication. In conclusion, there is the opinion that using of social
networks
 like Twitter or Facebook are negative for
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 and all society, because it may lead to the dependence and unreliable using of time. But on the other
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hand they
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 fastly to get information as well as chat with each other without
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