In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the advent of technology, numerous methods for receiving
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have been introduced. It has been estimated that
,
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not even a single individual will purchase paper
books
as all the materials would be present on
internet
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without charging a single penny.
However
, I partially agree with
this
statement as online
books
are environmentally free and easily carried whereas, printable materials are
easy-to-read
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. These points will be discussed in subsequent paragraphs. To commence with, there are a plethora of advantages of online reading
Firstly
, gaining information through online sources would be fruitful for the environment as a
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trend of technological gadgets put an enormous decline in paper newspapers or magazines which ultimately, decreases the cutting of trees to produce papers.
Secondly
, it is an undeniable fact that digitalised
books
are easily portable because masses can carry myriad of
books
in one mobile and can read those
books
whenever they want. To cite an example, a commuter can read anything from the smartphone while on the trip, whereas, there would not be any need to carry physical
books
during the way. On the paradoxical side, every situation has two perspectives.
Therefore
, there are certain drawbacks
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electronic
books
. The
first
and foremost disadvantage is that spending long hours
on
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reading from cellular applications put a detrimental effect on the eyes of people.
Conversely
, it is somehow convenient for the reader to read through printed
books
instead
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from
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electronic gadgets.
Consequently
, sticking on cellphones for continuous hours would be harmful
for
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people.
Furthermore
, it is believed that physical reading is beneficial in terms of concentration as humans can pay better attention while reading from printed
books
rather than gaining knowledge from online applications which lures distractions in the form of pop-up sounds from other applications
such
as
whatsapp
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. To conclude,
although
, digital reading gives many benefits as it reduces the deforestation in the country and is portable in nature,
however
, I personally opine that printed information is much more helpful in terms of better health and concentration level of people.
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