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In modern societies, it is possible for people to go shopping, work and communicate via the internet without face-to-face communication. Is it a positive or negative development?

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The advancement in
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technology has uncertainly changed people’s lifestyle. Nowadays people are able to do their shopping, work and communicate with each other via the internet. In my opinion, while there are some drawbacks of having less facial communication, I believe there are
also
 clear positive aspects of
this
 trend. There is no denying that individuals can save
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time and money with the use of the Internet.
To begin
 with, people can contact a person or conduct meetings by using the network tools which are mostly free,
such
 as WeChat, QQ, ZOMM, etc. so they can be more flexible in working hours. As for online shopping, it is more convenient and effective to purchase everything through the internet since we have massive options of goods and we can order them on
computer
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 without leaving our homes. Admittedly,
this
 trend has many benefits, but there are some problems that should not be ignored.
Firstly
, the relationship between citizens will become more alienated without adequate face-to-face communication.
Secondly
, it will put a threat on our social skills since they all get addicted to network life and have less opportunity to talk to someone.
Lastly
, under
this
 influence, it is much possible for people, especially
for
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young teenagers, to feel lonely and isolated because their emotional needs cannot be satisfied without communicating with their friends and families. In conclusion, it is a positive development for us to have so many choices for communication, meanwhile，we need to pay more attention to the potential negative effects it brings to us.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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