Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

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people
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to read
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on online . majority number of masses claim that since
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numerous
number of individuals read
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on
internet
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but it will not
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the
newspaper
as
Newspaper
will remain a significant source.
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I completely agree with
this
statement. On the one hand , a majority of
people
loving to read various
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online as it is more convenient and less time consuming than others.
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since online
news
are
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available widely on
internet
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thus
masses don't have to go
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or stall in order to buy
newspaper
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as they can read it on
internet
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In every morning.
moreover
they
also
don't have to pay a single amount of money for reading
this
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.
furthermore
one can easily read
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at
anytime
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anywhere.For
this
reason
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online
newses
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are widely popular
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hand
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some individuals claim that
newspaper
will still remain
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essential source of
news
there are many reasons behind it as from the very past
newspaper
are available amongst
people
.since
majority
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of masses love to read
news
on
newspaper
because they feel immense happiness from it
also
there is another kind of
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satisfaction
to read
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on paper
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therefore
there is no chance for online
news
to
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mitigate
newspaper
.
moreover
newspaper
actually produce
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an authentic
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source of
news
there is less chance that fake
news
is available in it .
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a
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recent research
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data that claim maximum
news
are
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genuine in
newspaper
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the newspaper
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.For all of
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many
people
reckon that
newspaper
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important
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part
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human life . In my opinion, I would say different
people
have different opinions regarding
this
topic but I believe
newspaper
will remain significant actually it will become more popular in near future.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reliable
  • credible
  • focused
  • immersive
  • tangibility
  • tradition
  • access
  • digital devices
  • demographics
  • older generation
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