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Information whether to disclose freely or should be kept secret.discuss both views and give opinion.

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In the current century,
information
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 is considered the most valuable thing among students,researchers,corporates and scientists.
Information
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 can simply be defined as a cluster of data regarding a specific
topic
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. Some people opine that it is good to share maximum
information
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 in the field of scientific research,
business
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 and academics while others say that some
information
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 is precious and should not be shared without any remuneration.
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, in the case of scientific research and academics,
information
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 plays a crucial role as false
information
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 can lead to a major crisis. In scientific or student research students,tutors and scientists should share maximum
information
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 about a
topic
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 with each other. So that it will help other people who are interested in the same
topic
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. Students and teachers should have a right to free
information
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 because they are the future generation that should have
information
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 about the
topic
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.
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, the Chandrayan mission of India discovered evidence of water on the surface of the moon and scientists behind the discovery shared the
information
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 with everyone so that it can help the other nation on the same mission. So it is very important to share the correct
information
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 at the correct time.
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, there is some
information
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 which should be kept secret as in the case of
business
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 ideas and some major scientific inventions because it may threaten the peace between nation,
business
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. Each
business
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 has its own secret strategies and proportion for its products. Disclosing
such
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information
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 will affect them badly because other produces may use the same formulae to make duplicate products.
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, the proportion and ingredients for making Aranmula mirror are kept within the family in the place Aranmula. There is other
information
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 which should be kept as data regarding nuclear weapons,national security and trade secret between nations.
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information
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 should never be public because it may affect the security of nation and relation between other countries. To conclude, In my opinion,some
information
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 is very valuable and should not be shared with the public as it may threaten world peace. But the
information
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 which does not harm anyone and will help the world for new inventions should be shared freely because it would help many people who are trying to make the world a better place

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Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

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Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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