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Nowadays, we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening. What government can do to reduce the amount of rubbish produce?

#rubbish #government #amount
As the population is increasing nowadays it
also
 giving incline to the
rubbish
 which is become more and more
although
this
 is happening due to our own carelessness . ,
Moreover
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 I believe that
government
 should spread awareness of
this
 rising issue and take some necessary actions. On one hand, According to the University of Cambodia the Southern West, in 2016 according to the
research
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 every country produce more than 80% of the
rubbish
 of their population in 3 months which means there is more
rubbish
 than the population on the planet . There are some countries that are very well successful to tackle
this
 and make their environment a better place .
For instance
 , A country like Singapore ranks the on 1st place for environmental awareness which includes
rubbish
although
 it is a small country other nations can amply the same methods and make the world a better place
On the other hand
 ,
Government
 should motivate people to go plastic-free and
also
 as today's young generation is very much enthusiastic about the planet .
Government
 should provide them with basic necessity so that among every 10 people there will be at least 6 people who will take actions against the
rubbish
 we are creating . To illustrate ,
Government
 can come up with automatic machines from which we will be able to differentiate
rubbish
 from the garbage
also
 we should run the campaign about going plastic-free . We not only produce
rubbish
 we
also
 make the air toxic which we are breathing .
Thus
 , if
government
 take all necessary action and spread awareness through
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society we will be able to decline the production of
rubbish
 In conclusion,
Although
 the
government
 should take the responsibility for reducing the
rubbish
 . we as individuals should
also
 take little actions from our end
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