You bought a piece of furniture from a store in another town recently. there is a problem with the item you purchased. write a letter to the store manager. in your letter Explain the details of your purchase. Describe the problem that you have with it suggest what can be done about it
Dear sir,
My name is Ali Lavasani, and I am quite an ardent buyer of your
furniture
company. I am writing to voice my disappointment with one of my recent purchases. On June 14, 2022, I purchased a dressing table and double bed from your store. You also
offered a free home delivery, which made me even more comfortable.
However
, I observed that the dressing table sides were damaged the instant I received the furniture
delivered by the team. In addition
, the dressing of the table’s mirror was not correctly fastened to the wood. As far as I can tell, one of the causes of this
damage might be the item’s inadequate packaging. The furniture
was wrapped in plastic wrap with nothing to protect it from the elements. As a result
, the damage that occurred during shipping, or the substance used to secure the mirror to the wood was poor quality. I have also
attached some photos to substantiate my argument.
I expect you to take firm measures in the future to avoid such
problems. Because you have a 6-month replacement offer, I expect you to replace the furniture
as soon as possible. I am looking for a positive and timely response so that I am able to continue purchasing from your store without hesitation in the future.
Looking forward to your quick action on this
problem.
Yours Sincerely,
Ali LavasaniSubmitted by lavasania49 on
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Task Achievement
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Coherence and Cohesion
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Suitable Writing Tone
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite