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Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life? Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #media #privacy #price #fame #invasion #life
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While some
people
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 think that the
privacy
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 of famous
people
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 should be respected, others believe that
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 is the price to pay for being famous. Personally, I think that the
privacy
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 of
people
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 should be respected whether they are famous or not. Nowadays, the
media
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 has become more and more interested in every detail of the
lives
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 of famous
people
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.
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, they are using all kind of available methods to get any relevant information about them. Sometimes these methods could harm their
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.
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, being chased by paparazzi all day will make them uncomfortable and turn their life into a nightmare. To illustrate it
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, Britney Spears had suffered from psychological problems because of the treatment she had from the
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 of her private life.
Privacy
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 is the right for every person whether he is famous or not. Being famous does not make it right for the
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 to invade their
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 and broadcast everything about them to their fans and followers.
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, they are
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 humans like everyone else, and they obviously prefer not to share every moment of their
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 with others.
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, being treated in
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 a way could certainly bring them into dangerous situations. To conclude, famous ,
people
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 are being chased recently by the
media
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 to collect every detail of their private
lives
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 by using harmful methods. I believe that the
media
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 should respect the
privacy
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 of famous
people
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 and not chase them pretending that
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 is the price to pay for being famous.
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