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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Most
people
 want to know the things happening around them. Not only the older generation but
also
 younger
people
 nowadays interested in reading for general awareness. In
this
 essay, I support newspapers and paperbacks will slowly diminish but argued the issues with
time
 spent on the internet.
To begin
 with, the percentage of
people
 reading news is increasing day by day, with easy access to the internet from one`s comfort zone.
For example
, as per latest survey figures shows the number of users fond of reading news increased exponentially. Earlier newspapers or paperbacks are the only source to get the latest updates of the things happening around the world.
However
, the waiting
time
 is almost the
next
 day to get updated news.But, now folks can read the book which released in another country at the same as its release.Due to the increase in artificial intelligence, one can get immediate suggestions to similar topics,
therefore
 increasing the reading
time
 of the user. As the amount of
time
 spent on the internet is increases, most
people
 unable to get proper sleep. The comfort to the eyes reading from the newspaper will be satisfying than looking into an electronic screen. Distractions while reading from the web will be more, For ,example the advertisements will be displayed based on the user previous activity, causing to stay on other pages than the one has to spend. In conclusion, the comforts provided with reading online could result in replacing newspapers with digital content in near future.
However
, one should miss the feel of reading from books, holding physically in hand.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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