Many people believe that mobile phones cause more harms than the benefits and that’s why mobile phones should be restricted? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often

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argued

agreed

that mobile phones bring more drawbacks than advantages and

therefore

their

use

should be limited.I

totaly

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totally

disagree with

this

statement because of the

convienence

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convenience

and socialisation they offer. To commence with, communication has become much easier with the advent of

cellphones

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.

In other words

, individuals can convey messages to their loved ones at the touch of the button despite them being very far away.

As a result

,

people

are living happily regardless of

the

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geographical distance.

For example

, I am living in Saudi Arabia and my family is in Zimbabwe , but we talk on a daily basis and know what is taking place there because of the

use

of mobile phones.

Thus

, they are beneficial to

people

as they make it much easier to communicate.

Secondly

, a cellphone coupled with

internet

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the internet

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is very useful in our day to day living.

This

is because of the social media platforms that individuals can engage on. With these platforms ,

people

with the same interest are brought together and they can share ideas on how to achieve their goals.

For instance

, I joined a cooking page on Facebook and my life has never been the same again as l have learnt how to cook like a pro. It is undoubtedly

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, that the

use

of these devices have positive results and should not be restricted. To sum up,

moblie

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mobile

phones have a lot of benefits which include faster , easier communication and

also

the

use

of

internet

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the internet

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where one can do various online things which are

convienent

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convenient

and educational.

Consequently

, it is very clear that they bring more upsides than disadvantages to

people

and the society at large.