Childcare training courses should be mandatory for all parents. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and include relevant examples.

In

this

era of modernisation, both father and mother work

for earning

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to have a comfortable standard of living

therefore

, it may happen that they

could not

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take responsibility for their

child

properly. I agree with the notion that proper guidelines and workshops will help the

parents

to effectively manage all sorts of required

care

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their infant. I will be discussing the same in the following paragraphs.

To begin

with, there are various reasons to provide training to

the

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parents

to help them grow their

toddler

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naturally. First and foremost

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, the emotional

well being

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of the offspring is the foundation of their entire life. To strengthen

this

base, both

parents

should spend quality time with their

ward

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.

However

, the training can make them learn time management,

work-life

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balance

as well as

practice patience and stay calm with the new responsibility of the

child

. A pleasant state of mind of the

parents

helps to nurture the emotional

well being

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of the

child

.

Secondly

, the newborn baby means an entirely different responsibility which involves tasks, like changing diapers, feeding the baby, their immunisation schedule, etc. The

parents

might be unaware of all these tasks which really

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skill and patience. Through the workshop, the guardians will become confident to take

care

of all these tasks happily.

Thirdly

, the developmental milestones of a

child

are crucial aspects that should be taken

care

of by

parents

very keenly.

According to

the report by the University of Oxford, published on 23 March 2020, the percentage of deaf and dumb children reported at the age of 5 years was higher (63% ) than, that of the age of 1 year. So, if

parents

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tracked the developmental milestones of their

child

, it would have saved the

child

from future consequences.

Therefore

, proper training of the

parents

is vital for looking after their

child

.

Lastly

, Few

parents

do not know how to cover their newborn babies,

according to

the changes in weather.

This

is incredibly important because the thermal activity of the

child

is completely different from adults. In my

neighbourhood

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a lady kept her baby open in the AC room , on the bed and later, after one hour the infant developed

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fever and

shifted

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to the hospital.

This

incident made all families in my colony, aware and alert towards

child

care

. In conclusion, it is immensely important to take proper

care

of the

child

in terms of physical

as well as

emotional

well being

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and training workshops for

parents

would be incredibly important for the same. I completely agree with the statement to train

parents

to

grow

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child

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nicely so that we all

could

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have a healthy and beautiful society.