One of the major problems facing the world today is the growing number of refugees. Some says developed nations should tackle this problem by taking more refugees. Do you agree or disagree?

One of the world’s major issue is the growing numbers of

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. They usually come from

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affected by wars, natural disasters, or conflicts in their origin

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. Many believe that developed

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ought to help

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problem by accepting more

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. I completely agree with

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of all, developed

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are already well-established and have better health and refugee camps compared to developing

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. The majority of developing

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are still struggling to support their own people, let alone to take more people to take care of. For

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reason, developed nations should accept more

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than developing

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do.

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way, they can ensure the welfare of the

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and give them sufficient life support.

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,

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in Australia are in a good condition and have good access to food and medicine because Australia has been protecting and taking good care of them.

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, accepting the

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can bring some advantages to the host

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as they can become productive members of the society. If the host

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gives them access to job and education, they can definitely become productive and help the host

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increase the labour force. In turn, they can be the engines of job growth.

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, a study in the U.S. showed that almost a quarter

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of entrepreneurs in the

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are immigrants. Other research

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disclosed that native workers do better in their job when there are immigrants as their colleagues. To sum up, I believe that developed

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should take more

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into their

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is because developed

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can give them a better place to stay and better access to health care and they can

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be benefited from the presence of the

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in their nations.