Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is making a great
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of garbage. It is undeniable that
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of goods has become an essential part of
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. For the purpose of
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essay, why is it happening and how the
government
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tendency, both questions will be scrutinized. Everybody knows that modern people prefer buying something in a package which one will be thrown in a trash bin at home,
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, a lot of litter collects after every
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and previous generations. Our parents used reusable packages,
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amount of refuse,
on the contrary
, people in our time fond of disposable items,
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as dishes, packs and any covers,
as a result
, nowadays, especially urban dwellers, is produced more rubbish. Naturally, the
government
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number of garbage using for packaging
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goods reusable containers which would be made from glass, wood or material. Another method of
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of trash is
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for individuals that it is the
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enemy of our nature and that we should care of our surrounding by reducing of
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of litter. Another side of the coin is producing waste of industry, obviously, the
government
has to motivate to create non-waste production that it is the most perspective direction of developing of any factories. In conclusion, taking everything mentioned up in our final analysis, we can say that producing of garbage can be solved by the
government
as well as by ordinary citizens.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • disposable culture
  • over-packaging
  • non-recyclable
  • public awareness
  • waste management
  • environmental impact
  • recycle
  • recycling facilities
  • waste separation
  • single-use products
  • infrastructure
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