Nowadays university education is considered very important for people's future. However, there are a lot of successful people who didn't get higher education. Do you think that higher education is necessary to succeed in life? Justify your opinion with relevant examples.

College
Education
is very important to one’s future though some
people
say that others have become successful without going to
college
. In
this
essay, I will discuss that higher
education
is essential to become successful in
life
. Nowadays higher
education
is one of the best pathways to become successful in
life
.
People
with universities diplomas are far more qualified to find jobs and demand higher positions. They are
also
in a better position to demand higher pays because of their expertise, competencies and knowledge. Companies, corporations and other institutions are always searching for the best persons with very impressive educational backgrounds for
a certain positions
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, and it’s always based on the educational attainment of an individual who’s right for the position.
For instance
, in the aspect of promotion in
a corporations
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corporations
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, one of the requirements is always the educational attainment of the applicant not to mention his other qualifications. Overall,
college
degrees really matter when it comes to job promotions, higher pays and job security.
However
, there are some
people
who do not possess
college
diplomas and yet are very successful in
life
and were only able to pursue their higher
education
later in
life
. There are many reasons that I can attribute to
this
.
Firstly
, probably these individuals did not have the money to pursue their
education
instead
they needed to work to tend to their needs.
Secondly
, there are
also
persons who are not really good in the classroom are but are good in the field. Like
for example
, there are many businessmen here in the Philippines who had not been to
college
but have become successful in their companies. These
people
are very smart and skilled and knew the ins and outs of starting a business. I could say that the vast work experiences have helped them a lot. Overall, a university diploma does not guarantee an individual’s success in
life
. In summary, higher
education
is very essential to a person’s success in
life
,
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however
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there are some individuals who do not have educational degrees and yet are prosperous in
life
. In
this
essay, I think that higher
education
is a good pathway to a better
life
and that it can guarantee a person
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a more stable, higher pay and more secured job in the future.
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