Childhood is most important period for everybody and child learns many things during this time. Some others say child’s future and career are only built after the completion of their school. What do you think? Give examples to support.

Computers and the internet have changed the lives of humans in both workplace and homes.

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essay suggests that the advantages like socialising and

time saving

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outweigh the primary disadvantage

that is

isolation among the family members.

To begin

with, making friends online and talking to talking to them is the foremost benefit.

Moreover

, people from different countries can make contacts and it would help them in learning their cultures and traditions.

For example

, college students can learn history or geography about a particular place from the natives through social media sites.

Secondly

, works have become easier and

time

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saver due to computers.

For instance

, nowadays employees can work from home and share it with

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employers anywhere in the world from their own comfort.

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, in the long

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would benefit both the managers as well as the workers, as they could utilize the journey

time

for something productive.

On the other hand

, in search of virtual relationships, people forget those near them and it is a drawback of computer technology. Facebook is a prime example, where a person may have thousands of friends, but during the

time

of distress, there wouldn't be anyone for the support.

However

,

this

can be solved by limiting the

time

for social media and providing quality

time

for the near ones. To conclude, even though social isolation is a con of information technology, pros

such

as learning new cultures through

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social media and preserving quality

time

for the family outweigh

over

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it.