There are some problems in the changing room in your sport center. Write a letter to the sport center manager. In your letter, you should: - Describe the problems in the changing room - Explain why the sport center is important for you - Suggest what the manager should do.

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing
this
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letter to express my discontent with problems in the
sport
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centre.I know that
,
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apply
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you have recently installed a new
shower
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system, but it is not working right.
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, there are a few problems with
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shower
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the shower
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room.
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, there are no walls or curtains to hide you from people who are walking by or taking
shower
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too.You can understand my frustration when
every one
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can see you taking
shower
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, it is very uncomfortable.It would be great if you will buy curtains for each
shower
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.
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, the main problem is
air
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the air
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condition system which is
broke
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broken
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.As you might know, mostly all people are taking hot showers and all hot air is spreading in the room, which can lead to headache or worse.
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, I have
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because of fog that hot water created. I am looking forward to hearing that you have taken the necessary steps to improve or buy new conditioners to maintain your reputation. Yours faithfully, Saveliy
Dychenko
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Dyachenko
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