In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

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are suffering from health problems due to eating too much fast

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in some countries. Due to

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government

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has the right to impose a higher

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on that

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. In my opinion, I agree that the

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for fast

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ought to be revised and by increasing the

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it will greatly give positive impact to lower down

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interest eat that

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. A good reason fast

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should receive a higher

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is that it will help

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to have a lower interest to purchase fast

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.

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method will force

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to opt

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alternative to eat more healthy

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that contains decent nutrition.

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, without increasing the

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for fast

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it allows

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from lower-income family to gain junk

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.

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, increasing the

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is the accurate solution to be applied as it able to reduce the scale of

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eating the

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. Another point to consider is that the current environment of

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life

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to take into account as well since most of the

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busy with their carrier and

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to cook at home is lesser, so they are looking for an immediate approach.

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, a working wife has to execute various works at an office and did not have much

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to have healthy

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for their self and her family.

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,

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should play a vital role in resolving

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issue before it became worse. Controlling it at an initial stage will help

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to always stay healthy all the

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.

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, imposing a higher

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to

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fast

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will

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increase

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revenue while ensuring

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healthy.

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, both parties will acquire the benefit.

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approach

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capable of

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financial support provided by a

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to the healthcare sector since most of the

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a substantial amount of money given to that sector to take care of

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that

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a chronic disease.

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that, the

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also

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ought to consider increasing or imposing

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advertisement for junk

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. By doing

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way, it will help

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to not so influenced by the advertisement provided by

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company which usually conducted in a creative manner. In conclusion, fast

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contains bad substances which can affect the human body in a long run,

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government

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must take precautionary steps in imposing a

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as a higher

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will be impacted the business while a lower

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result in many

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takes the

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.