In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

People

are suffering from health problems due to eating too much fast

food

in some countries. Due to

this

situation

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government

has the right to impose a higher

tax

on that

food

. In my opinion, I agree that the

tax

for fast

food

ought to be revised and by increasing the

tax

it will greatly give positive impact to lower down

people

interest eat that

food

. A good reason fast

food

should receive a higher

tax

is that it will help

people

to have a lower interest to purchase fast

food

.

This

method will force

people

to opt

another

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alternative to eat more healthy

food

that contains decent nutrition.

For example

, without increasing the

tax

for fast

food

it allows

people

from lower-income family to gain junk

food

.

Hence

, increasing the

tax

is the accurate solution to be applied as it able to reduce the scale of

people

eating the

food

. Another point to consider is that the current environment of

people

life

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to take into account as well since most of the

people

busy with their carrier and

time

to cook at home is lesser, so they are looking for an immediate approach.

For instance

, a working wife has to execute various works at an office and did not have much

time

to have healthy

food

for their self and her family.

On the other hand

,

Government

should play a vital role in resolving

this

issue before it became worse. Controlling it at an initial stage will help

people

to always stay healthy all the

time

.

For example

, imposing a higher

tax

to

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fast

food

will

also

increase

government

revenue while ensuring

people

healthy.

In other words

, both parties will acquire the benefit.

This

approach

also

capable of

to reduce

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financial support provided by a

government

to the healthcare sector since most of the

time

a substantial amount of money given to that sector to take care of

people

that

has

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a chronic disease.

Besides

that, the

government

also

ought to consider increasing or imposing

tax

advertisement for junk

food

. By doing

this

way, it will help

people

to not so influenced by the advertisement provided by

fast

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food

company which usually conducted in a creative manner. In conclusion, fast

food

contains bad substances which can affect the human body in a long run,

hence

government

must take precautionary steps in imposing a

tax

as a higher

tax

will be impacted the business while a lower

tax

result in many

people

takes the

food

.