Human activities have negative effects on plants and animal species. Some people think that it is too late to do anything about this problem. Other people believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Human being has always been abusing the mother earth since the industrial revolution. Almost every kind of environmental problem or animal distinction, are the negative result of human activities. Some
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believe that we can still save our planet and immediate
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must be taken. Others think that these
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are just grasping at straws. In my opinion, both approaches are equally reasonable, but personal statements vary. Some
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believe that we can take proactive approaches to save plants and animals.
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has once been taken as dangerous distinctive species, but with the effort of many zoologists, pandas are being
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transferred
to a much safer environment,
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as the zoo,
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can
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the conservation of them. Now, we can see pandas in zoos all around the world, the number of pandas
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surely secured.
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, some
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say that
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actions
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can never keep up with the damages made by human. Some disruptions are irreversible,
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the ozone hole, it takes centuries for it to recover. Before that, animals and plants may suffer from drought and forest fire.
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, according to Darwin’s Natural Selection, it is quite natural for animals to die out. Dinosaurs become extinct because of the volcano explosion, and it is unnatural to preserve them or even bring them back to life. We surely don’t want to see
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horrible nightmares like the movie Jurassic Park
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happen in real life. In conclusion, some
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nowadays engage in environmental events
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and devoted themselves to protect the living creatures on earth. While some only take passive
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. I believe that
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there are chances that these protective
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are useless, we
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shouldn't
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give up on doing so. If we don’t give it a try, we will never know what we can accomplish.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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