The amount of time spend on sport and exercise should be increased in school in order to tackle the problem of overweight children? Do you think this the best way to deal with the problem? What other solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, the

problem

of obesity has increased exponentially in which most youngsters are affected. For

this

reason, school administration should increase the time duration of sports and other physical exercises activities to take control

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To begin

with, there are various methods which could support us to reduce overweight concern owing to obesity, gastro problems. Perhaps doing regular physical exercises and a proper diet plan might become a milestone to handle

this

issue. Moving forward to school administration where they should include some additional sports courses in their academic calendar that could be mandatory subject, student give more attention to it. Recently, a survey has been conducted by the world health organization where 12% of youngsters have physically unfit due to inappropriate schedule of a meal and lack of physical activities.

Hence

, the extension of the timeline in the school’s roaster would be the best option to deal with the overweight issue.

Nevertheless

, some more options

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available that would help to reduce problems because of fat. Currently, door to door health check-up scheme

as well as societies has(have) allowed free cultural classes

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can absolutely highlight outstanding performance if we consider it seriously.

Therefore

, most countries government have been giving attention to(on)

such

compulsory health test and allocate funds to eco-cultural events that can make the environment stress free, which is

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a part of

this

problem

. In conclusion,

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is absolutely correct that extension of time duration for other physical activities and sports will help to reduce the number of cases because of overweight

problem

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, government and societies have been working on

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area to minimize the effects of obesity and gastro

problem

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