The amount of time spend on sport and exercise should be increased in school in order to tackle the problem of overweight children? Do you think this the best way to deal with the problem? What other solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, the
problem
of obesity has increased exponentially in which most youngsters are affected. For
this
reason, school administration should increase the time duration of sports and other physical exercises activities to take control
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I will point out the best method to hold on it and
also
provides few suggestions which can give better result especially due to overweight.
To begin
with, there are various methods which could support us to reduce overweight concern owing to obesity, gastro problems. Perhaps doing regular physical exercises and a proper diet plan might become a milestone to handle
this
issue. Moving forward to school administration where they should include some additional sports courses in their academic calendar that could be mandatory subject, student give more attention to it. Recently, a survey has been conducted by the world health organization where 12% of youngsters have physically unfit due to inappropriate schedule of a meal and lack of physical activities.
Hence
, the extension of the timeline in the school’s roaster would be the best option to deal with the overweight issue.
Nevertheless
, some more options
also
available that would help to reduce problems because of fat. Currently, door to door health check-up scheme
as well as societies has(have) allowed free cultural classes
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can absolutely highlight outstanding performance if we consider it seriously.
Therefore
, most countries government have been giving attention to(on)
such
compulsory health test and allocate funds to eco-cultural events that can make the environment stress free, which is
also
a part of
this
problem
. In conclusion,
this
is absolutely correct that extension of time duration for other physical activities and sports will help to reduce the number of cases because of overweight
problem
.
Also
, government and societies have been working on
this
area to minimize the effects of obesity and gastro
problem
.
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