Some people believe that education in certain countries do not cater to the economic needs of society. What are the drawbacks of this education system and mention some solutions.
Education is a solution to almost every worry of a nation yet there some denizens of few
countries
believe that it does not serve the economic aspect, because of the poorly designed education system. The following paragraphs will discuss the possible reasons for such
a problem and propose a handful of remedial measures.
To embark with, the conspicuous rationale as to why schooling is not fruitful for society, because the cost of it is quite high that everyone cannot afford it, consequently
, rise in illiteracy and less number of people working towards the development of the province. For example
, In countries
like Afghanistan, parents prefer to send their children to do labour jobs
because they cannot pay the school fee. Sadly, those children may never have any future to come out of this
vicious cycle. Another contributing factor is the lack of white-collar jobs
in a country, which results in most graduates migrate to another country with better jobs
and life. Therefore
, the aforementioned reasons depict a clear picture of why education is not fulfiling the wealthy needs of certain countries
.
Undoubtedly, every lock has a key. Similarly
, some solutions should be implemented to overcome this
issue too. Firstly
, tuition fee should be as low as possible if authorities cannot afford to make it free,
so that the maximum number of people can be benefitted from it. Remove the comma
apply
For instance
, free studies or lesser fee will help the majority of citizens to get a chance to graduate and eventually drive the nation towards its betterment. In addition
Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
, it is Change preposition
to this
a
responsibility of Correct article usage
the
government
to create better Correct article usage
the government
jobs
, so that they can give a reason to their youth not to move to western countries
and help build a better place. Hence
, it makes it apparent by implementing a better system can help to solve a state's economic problems.
To conclude, in consideration of the above analysis it is ostensible to say that with the best foot forward from citizens and government such
an issue can be tackled and solve many
forthcoming Replace the quantifier
much
crisis
.Change to a plural noun
crises
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