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Some people say it is a waste of time to plan for the future and it is more important to focus on the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays much of our
time
 has been spent thinking about our plans in the short-term and long-term.
Although
 It can be beneficial for us to imagine
tomorrow
, personally I believe that focus on daily routine can be brought for us a wide range of advantages. Some people argue that, if we have a plan for the future, we will be more successful and it prevents decrease our thinking
time
. It means that, when we set a goal and try hard to achieve it, the possibility of the reach them grows significantly.
In addition
, you spent most of your
time
 planning and recognize the way and you will not think about that and you going to follow your plan without any extra analysing. But personally, I believe that managing your mind in the present can be more beneficial for everybody. there is a lot of doubt about
next
 and we will not expect what going to happen in the future. As result, we must set our mind on now for build the
tomorrow
 and it is more practical than other ways. The total situation is not predictable and the only tense that we can struggle and control as we can is present.
On the other hand
, many goals due to the lack of any performance will be destroyed by our selves so why we should pay attention to
tomorrow
. In a
conclusion
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 many people ,waste their
time
 on planning and they forget to carry out any things. So not only
this
 method of thinking can be wrong, but
also
 most of our present
time
 are wasted by that. so, in my ,opinion we must pay more attention to the present to have better
tomorrow
 and if we carry out another thing, a lot of
time
 will be lost.
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